Grace's 5 Fan Fiction Sites URL

The Three Little Pigs

In this fan fiction, the author has changed the story with humor. Personally, I liked the beginning because the author briefly described the personalities each of the pigs had. The author also showed realistic description of the wolf that the wolf was the most powerful character in the story.    

The Little Red Riding Hood

I liked the way the author changed what the grand mother said at the last to the Riding Hood. In the original one, the wolf says "The better to hear you" but in this story it is changed to "That comes from listening". However, I didn't like the overall story because it was a bit disgusting that the author has made the Little Red Riding Hood to eat bits and pieces of her own grand mother such as grand mother's jaw, blood, teeth etc.   

Snow white

In the original fan fiction, the Prince kisses Snow white who ate the poisonous apple but in this story the Snow white wakes up by one of the servant stumbling on a tree brunch and the piece of the poisoned apple pops out of Snow white. 

I liked the rhythm of this story which was quick and simple to understand. 

Beauty and the Beast

Just like the original, Beauty's father who ran into the castle by the storm, gets imprisoned by the Beast. The Beast commands the father to be released and his daughter to be send to the castle. The love between the Beauty and the Beast grows. At the end, the Beast was just about to die but turns into a Prince by Beauty, saying that she will marry him.  

The story wasn't a big difference with the original. I didn't like it much because the author has written the story too simple without any dynamic parts. The author sticked to the original characters too much which was boring.

 

Cinderella

In this fan fiction, it is written in a mice, Oscar's, point of view. In this story, Cinderella is the same as the original and most of the outline is the same. She cleans and tidy's up everyday by her step-mother order, then by the fairy god mother she gets changed into a dress, goes to the ball, meets prince charming and accidentally leaves one of her glass shoe.  

There was no big difference of the Cinderella'

s character with the original one, but, the author characterized the mice and the Fairy God Mother in the story which was more enthusiastic to me. It was fun to read in a mouse's point of view.