Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Dami's Fanfiction FInal


The war is finally over and a new world was staring to begin…
Hermione was already packed and ready for the Hogwarts express. She looked in the mirror nervously and checks her appearance.  She looked rather exciting to be able to go back to Hogwarts at last. She grinned to herself and went outside to her parents who was waiting outside to drop her off at the platform 9 ¾.
“Hey Hermione!” she turned back and saw Ron and Harry smiling at her. She was about to burst tears when she saw Ron and Harry, she was so pleased to see them again. She gave them a huge hug. “Blimey Hermione, is that you? You look different…” Ron said with his mouth wide open “Yea, Hermione, You look prettier what have you done?” Harry added with a broad smile. Hermione felt a warm blush rise to her cheeks and turned away to hope on to the Hogwarts express. Ron and Harry giggled and followed her.
The train roared moving, “Where are you going Hermione?” Ron asked curiously, “Head’s compartment,” Hermione said gleefully and hurried off before any of them could say anything.
Hermione was stunned when she saw Malfoy sitting in the head’s compartment. “What are you doing here Malfoy?” Hermione said rudely. He turned away his head without saying anything. Hermione thought he looked rather pale and pitiful. Oh yes, Draco’s parents were dead, their bodies limp when he had found them. They had fought on the losing side Hermione suddenly felt pity for Malfoy and silently sat beside Malfoy.  Hermione felt million years has passed when the Hogwarts express finally stopped at Hogwarts. Hermione hurriedly grabbed her trunk and rushed out to see Harry and Ron.

As Hermione made her way through the crowded halls of Hogwarts, she reflected back on the past few months. It had been over four months since Voldemort had been defeated, and the wizarding world had certainly changed for the better. The destroyed parts of the castle had been rebuilt over the summer, and although there were still some hallways that were off limits, the damage was minimal. All students had been notified that they would need to repeat the last year, as Hogwarts under Death Eater rule was not exactly a school of learning, save for some very nasty magic. Harry, Ron, and Hermione, however, were given the opportunity to graduate without completing their seventh year. The Ministry had decided that a year of hunting horcruxes and escaping Death Eaters was enough of an education; plus, there was the whole killing Voldemort thing.

Hermione had been extremely excited when she had received not only the book list for her last year in school, but a badge that proclaimed Head Girl. As she reached her room, she spoke the password ("Unity"), and stepped inside. The common room was decorated with reds and greys. Hermione sat down on her bed and open the new book she received a minute ago. After reading for the better part of an hour, she rubbed her eyes and stretched. She decided to take a gentle stroll, she grabbed Harry’s invisibility cloak and stepped outside. It was very quiet she slowly walked up to the top of the Hogwarts castle. She stunned when she saw Malfoy sitting down on the bench he seemed lost in deep thinking. Hermione gave him a brief greet as she removes the invisibility cloak. Malfoy looked at Hermione and gave her a gentle smile.
“When I woke up, there was no one around me, all my family were found death. Then I started to regret on what I have done and gone through, if I could turn back time, I would not be a death eater.”
Malfoy suddenly confessed his true feeling. Hermione felt sympathy for Malfoy, she grabbed his hand, and his hand was cold as ice. She quickly released his hand in surprise and walked back to her room.

After Hermione shut her door after her, she slid down the door and sank to the floor, putting her head in her hands, taking deep, calming breaths. What had happened out there? She grabbed DRACO MALFOY’s hand; she tried to calm herself and told herself it was accident.
Draco was in a similar state of mind. He felt a warm feeling when Hermione grabbed his hand, and another feeling that he has not felt it before. She was the enemy, a mudblood; she was one of the people who killed his parents. Malfoy returned to his room and tried to sleep. They both thought about each other in their bed.  They both did not realize it was their beginning of love.



Tuesday, 9 August 2011

Grace's Fan Fiction Final

 The Three Little Pigs




Once upon a time there were three fat grumpy brother pigs in France.They were famous for stealing, fighting, arguing, hurting the neighborhoods in the town for their own sakes.

One day, as usual, the oldest one out of the pigs went to the supermarket to fill up its stomach. 
He was so hungry that he decided to sit down in the middle of the supermarket with the unpaid foods and began to eat. Nobody had the courage to stop the pig because they all knew what would happen to themselves and knew nobody could win the pig over. The pig finished all of the foods he chose to eat and then stuffed up more foods in his huge bag pack and went back home.

The problem started from that day. In the middle of the night, the oldest one began to roll on the ground all crunched up sweating and screaming "Stomach ache!!!" The other two pigs didn't know what to do because they didn’t know what stomach ache was, since no pig ever got sick ever before. The oldest one was still on the ground sweating and screaming for help. So the other two pigs decided to get the oldest one for help to their next door neighbor. They knocked and knocked their neighbor and the dark house lightened up. The owner of the house saw the pigs knocking on their door through the curtain. But the lights turned back off immediately and nobody came outside for the pigs. They tried all of the neighborhoods in their street but not a single neighbor helped them out. The sun had already come up when they realized they were exhausted. They slowly walked back to their home without earning anything. When they arrived back home, the oldest one was still on the ground but he was grey in coloured. The two pigs shacked, hit and yelled to wake him up and then realized there were no hope for his dead brother to wake up. That day, two of the lift over pigs buried their oldest brother on the back yard and decided to pack everything up to move to Italy. 
The two pigs thought and thought, ‘why did nobody help us?’ and the two regretted with the rude behaviors they caused to others and wanted to take time to reflect back to themselves.

The two pigs arrived in Italy and bought a house next to the food market for convenience. 
However, the two pigs had already forgotten everything about their dead brother and the shock they got from the neighbors and the decisions they have made before they leaved France. The day they moved in to their new home, the youngest one again went to their new neighbor for food, meanwhile the other one went to the super market. The pig came back home from the super market hand full of, of course with the unpaid foods. 
He began to eat while he waited for his little brother to come back home, who went to threaten their new neighbor for food, but then slowly he fell asleep and the time ticked to the next day.  
When he woke up he realized that the youngest one didn't come back home. 

The pig was curious and decided to go and check it’s next door. He knocked and knocked his next door. The dark house lightened up and this time the door started to open up slowly. 
A big hairy wolf welcomed the pig with a knife on his hand. "I was waiting for you. Did you come for your brother? Well come in come in, he wasn't very tasty as he was the smallest." 
Through the slightly opened door, the pig could see his youngest brother laid on the wolf's table with a folk tucked on his belly. With two pig eyes the pig quickly looked back up to the wolf and through the wolf’s smile he could see the pointy teeth and hear the low growl from the wolf. With a snap, the pig woke up in the reality.  The pig ran as fast as he could back to his house and locked the door and when he was about to close the windows, it was too late, the wolf had already come inside his home. 
“I’ll puff and I’ll huff you into my stomach my little pig!”

Few days later the pig’s house was out for sale by the wolf.
The time passed and the wolf told his grand children a memorable story of his.  
“In France, your grandmother used to have 3 fat pig thieves as her neighbor, 
who always stole all of the foods of hers and threatened to get everything they wanted. 
But one day, the two of the fat grumpy pigs came to Italy and moved into my next door….” 
The wolf taught his grand children never to buy hatred to anybody by one’s silly behavior.



Grace's Fan Fiction Draft

The Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three fat grumpy brother pigs in France. They were famous for stealing, fighting, arguing, hurting the neighborhoods in the town for their own sakes.

One day, as usual, the oldest one of the pigs went to the supermarket to fill up it's stomach. He was so hungry that he decided to sit down in the middle of the supermarket with the unpaid foods and began to eat. After finishing all of the foods he chose to eat, he stuffed up more foods in his huge bag pack and went back home. Nobody had the courage to stop the pig because they all knew what would happen to themselves and knew nobody could win them over. 

The problem started from then. In the middle of the night, the oldest one began to roll on the ground all crunched up sweating and screaming "Stomach ache!!!". The other two pigs didn't know what to do because it was their very first time in their life to know what stomach ache was. Not one of the pigs had a stomach ache before. The oldest one was still on the ground quacking for help so the two of the pigs decided to take the oldest one for help to their next door neighbor. They knocked and knocked their neighbor and the dark house lightened up. The owner of the house saw the pigs knocking on their door through the curtain but the lights turned off and nobody came outside for the pigs. They tried all of the neighborhoods in their street but not a single neighbor helped them. The sun had rise they slowly walked back to their home to check his older brother.  When they arrived back home,  the oldest one was still on the ground but he was grey in coloured. The two pigs shacked, hit and yelled to wake him up and then realized there were no hope for his dead brother to wake up. That day, two of the lift over pigs made a funeral for their oldest brother and decided to pack everything up to move to Italy by the shock they got from their neighbor hoods. They thought the true rumors about them didn't exist in Italy. 

The two pigs bought a house next to the food market for their convenience, thinking of starting the habit of stealing again. The two pigs had already forgot about their dead brother. Meanwhile the youngest one went to their new neighbor the other one went to the super market. The pig came from the super market hand full of, of course with unpaid foods. He began to eat while he waited for his brother who went to threat their neighbor for food. He fell asleep and the time ticked to the next day. The youngest one didn't come back home. 

The pig decided to go to the next door with curiosity. He knocked and knocked his next door. The dark house lightened up and the door started to open up slowly. A big big wolf welcomed the pig with a knife on his hand. "I was waiting for you. Did you come for your brother? Well come in come in, he wasn't very tasty as he was the smallest." Through the open door, the pig could see his youngest brother laid on the wolf's table with a folk tucked on his belly. As the pig woke up in the reality, the pig ran as fast as he could back to his house and locked the door and when he was about to close the windows it was too late, the wolf had already come inside his home. The next day the pigs house was out for sale by the wolf. 

As the time passed and the wolf told his grand children. Once when I was working alone for my kids education alone, there were three fat grumpy brother pigs who stole all of the foods everyday from my wife and children s' house in France....

Sunday, 7 August 2011

Peter's fan fiction Final



F.R.I.E.N.D.S Fan fiction
4 months after the end of episode 24 season 10. Ross and Rachel are going to Colorado state for a new life while Joey and the others were moving on with other things in their life. Please enjoy and critic where possible to refine this fan fiction. Critiquing makes the world go around.

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"What Ross?!" her anger was resonating and filled the room as she went around in a circle like a dog chasing its tail "I am sorry I didn't tell you sooner..but this will be better for all of us really" Ross replied hastily trying to keep up with her. Suddenly she stopped and looked at Ross and the room was very silent also the tension had somehow subsided. Rachel took a deep breath as she slowly sat down on the scotch guarded lounge suite. "Is this the best decision for all of us Ross really?" she finally said. "So quickly has everything changed, I know we have gone through a lot together but.. this is so fast" Ross and Rachel had moved out from their apartments in down town New York to a quiet suburban area in New Jersey only 4 months ago and already events were changing drastically. Almost too fast for Rachel she thought. Meanwhile Emily their baby daughter was sleeping peacefully in her crib upstairs. "It will be, really" Ross said.

"This new position will be exactly what our family needs and it is the opportunity of a life time for me" Ross sounded almost unrealistic as he held her hand for support. Colorado state University had contacted Ross a week ago offering him a position as head of department of Anthropology and he had been in a state of euphoria since then, he was just unsure how to break the news. His sister Monica had already moved to the countryside of New Jersey with her twins and he felt that New Jersey nor New York held any benefits for hisw own family. "Colorado Rachel... Beautiful scenery. Beautiful, just like you. I know you will like it if you gave it a chance. Emily can attend a nice country school and it will definitely be future proof" His smile and the way he expressed those words made Rachel sigh and they held each other. Ross had pitched the picture so fluidly and bought Rachel to surrender, "Fine fine fine, I will get Emily and in the mean time you can tell the others so we can make a au revoir".

Post it notes were always the perfect way to get some one's attention and get it quickly. Ross wanted to make sure tonight's farewell party went smoothly. To his delight this time it had worked perfectly. Everyone in their neighbourhood had turned up to his back yard party. "I am going to miss you guys heaps. But Colorado Ross... really? I know you were lame and a bit boring all this time but this is a whole new low for you ain't it?" Phoebe smirked as she took another swig at her fourth champagne glass. "We will be fine thanks" Ross gave the same expression back in return. Phoebe had been their closet friend for over ten years and so was Joey which made this evening extra special. "Go easy on that glass Phoebe" Ross remarked as he turned to Joey. "Joey Joey Joey, my good old friend. Heard you were also leaving us as well? Whats the plan?" Ross questioned "well.. I am planning to start my own sit com series which stars me.. I think I will call it "Joey" He winked. "Erm how imaginative.." Ross said as he slowly pictured a self glorification TV series that starred Joey. Joey has always been the clown in the group and still after so many years he has not changed a single bit.

Emily and Rachel came out with their fanciest clothes and everyone started to clap and whistle almost like they were celebrities down a red carpet. "Ain't this a little too overboard Rachel?" Ross obviously referring to their grand entrance "Well Ross, I wanted to ensure everyone remembered my taste of style and also Emily looks great as well don't you think?" She replied in a smug expression. Without another word Ross grabbed the nearest wine glass and fork and hit it gently to gather the party goers attention. "Thank you everyone for coming tonight in such short notice. In the past 4 months our time here has been amazing and you have all been so helpful. Our closet friends Joey and Phoebe with my sister Monica and her husband Chandler have all come together one last time to celebrate" Pause "They all have great futures ahead of them and I am sure they will succeed" the people clapped and jeered "I have taken a new job in Colorado and me and my lovely partner with my daughter Emily have all decided to take it and move as soon as possible" he could clearly see the shock in the eyes of those that did not know this already.

"One last time folks we will raise our glasses to all our wonderful memories that we had" Joey quickly had a childish grin on his face, clearly thinking of his own memories. After Ross's speech all the friends and neighbours came to congratulate them and hug them. Only hours was Rachel angry at Ross but now while she was holding little baby Emily she was clearly tearful and emotional as she gently smiled back at Ross. Ross grabbed the nearest beer and took one to Joey and Chandler. "Once friends, we will always be friends" And passed bottles around and all toasted.

Tuesday, 26 July 2011

Zara's Fan Fiction Draft

Howl's Moving Castle



I have always been a fan of Hayao Miyazaki's animations since when I was little. My favorite is 'Howl's Moving Castle' so I chose this one to write a fan fiction about. I always wondered about what happened later on when at the end of the animation, the prince from Howl's Moving Castle said he will be back for Sophie once the war is over as he was leaving. So in this fan fiction I will have the prince as my main character and have the story set as when the war is over and the prince starts a journey to find Sophie.

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Tuesday, 19 July 2011

Peter's 5 fan fic sites URL



The big bang theory:

The many super powers of sheldon cooper
In this fanfic the author has described what she believes the character Sheldon Cooper from The Big Bang Theory consists of various super powers. Super powers that are not intended for evil nor to combat evil but help to equip the character in his daily life (x-ray vision and copy).


The surrogate paradox
The female character Penny is considering if it is morally correct to host a surrogate child for a strange couple in the name of intellectual property.








9 month paradigm shift
The problem with this fan fic is that the author does not understand the original characters but had delivered a interesting prospective as in "what if" situations. For example, the character sheldon does not drink alchol nor does he believe in the concept of "one night stands". The character sheldon has become more loose.

Chinese takeways at midnight
What happens when you eat chinese takeways at midnight? you dream of flying in space with strangers who look like your friends but are not completely reversed. Well that is when you are Sheldon. Deemed to be crazy by hois fellow friends he is oftn described to be one lab accident away from being a super villan. the author has sticked to the original character developments and posted an interesting read into Sheldon's dreams. Quite similar to Lenerds dream in previous season about Sheldon respawning to more Sheldons because of over indulging in Thai food. Overall this fanfiction was short but a good read.

Sheldon & Amy
according to sheldon and amy, they are not dating.. but from all other perspectives their friends say otherwise. Author dives into an extension into the usual relationship between sheldon and amy. In the mind of a genius it is not all maths and physics but also human nature will always be in the unconscious level. The author does well to explore this realm where the usual audiences of the show would have not existed at all.

I thoroughly enjoyed this read and author has portrayed the characters well. I find the mixture of teenage romance genre with the scientific comedy genre a mismatch but nevertheless a good read.